A Promice To Keep ...
Ram's strechr wheeld out into Operation Theater...Silent fire burning up
her heart ...Each & every cell of her body trembling to the core
.Her knees weakens to the sight of Her beloved husband going thrw ..What
was happend she recalled the moments in the party ..When Ram clouded
her sight ,he got the shot from the lady .
Why ?? why it happend ? why god let it happen to me ? Oh god what i
should answer to every one ?? Especially Peehu ?? Tears continously
rolling from her eyes ,
Her beautiful doe eyes clouded with tears ,keep on looking at the Door ,waiting for doctor to comeout and said good news ...
Someone tugged at her saree "Mamma " A low voice echoed in her ears ..
Her princess came .."Where is Papa ? Is he alright mamma ??
Ha bachha he is going to be alright ,He told he will talk with you later ..Present you have to sleep its very late hai na ???
Priya called Nutz .
Nutz take her home and take care of her like your bhai until your bhai
returns ...She folded her hands to nutz to leave from there .
2 hours passed ...
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waiting ..
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waiting ..
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waiting ..
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Almost 5 hours passed
Doctor came out ...Taking his glasses out ,Sorry hum unhe bacha nahi paye...
Priya : Stared at the doctor skeptically ,Did she heard correct
"Her Ram is no more "
What the hell he is talking ,How come my man leaves me alone and go off ..
No this can't be true ,Her eyelashes paused dancing on her eyes ,Her
every muscle tensed up to stand her properly .Each and every cell in her
body screwd up to listen those words from doctor ...
[plz look at the promo again ,Observe Priyas shocked face ,her expressin
,Her fragile ,pale,vulnerbale state Oh my god its so wonderful yaar
,Mindblowing just watch it again i cant express her action in words]
Priya ...Priya ..Mrs. Kapoor ...Every one yelled to compose her ..But she veins of the ground ...
* * * *
Her legs gave her strength to ran back to His room ...To her surprise
there is no walls of the room ,She turned to see the other end ,Its just
absolutely surrounded with bushes ,creepers and big trees ..She feared
to the core ..
She continued her walk till she find a clue ...She is walking like witch to know where her husband was ???
A slow white streak of line appered where the narrow line of trees ...She called out him Ram ...
Ram .. R u ok ...Ram ...
Ram ... You there out ...
Tears contiuosly flowing from her cheeks ...
Plz Ram come out ..Im scared to this darkness ...Plzz
Ram .. I love you ..Plz forgive me Ram ...
She clutched a big tree cried her heart out ..loosing her grip hold she leaned to the floor ...
Her tears getting wet in her saree like there is no tomorrow ...
Her ears perked up hearing familiar voice ...In a trance she resumed her
cries ,Stood dumbfondedly concentrating on the voice ...
A slow muffle coming from north side ...She walks towards ..Yes she can hear the voice clearly ...
His voice ...calling of her name "Priya " Priya tum theek toh hai na " Priya
His whimpering murmurs made her cry even more ..she gave up all her strgeth to reach him ..
She is panting ..she saw his love of life sitting on bench near the lake beside an oak tree ...
* * * * *
Hospital ..
Rajat : what the hell you did doctor ,why you told her about her husband
Doctor : what i should tell ,I dont know whose husband is pradeep ...
Rajat :Suspiciouly " do you mean Pradeed expired in this ..." Looking confined mona
Docto; :Yes ,Mr.Rajat
Rajat :Than what about Ram ...
Doctor : He is in crtical condition ,He has to pull off ,We have done our best
Rajat :Pulling his collar why the hell you didnt inform us before only
one person we didnt save ..Now what the hell is happening with Priya ?
I warn you doctor if something happens to them ,I swear i dont know what i will do ??
[plzz im not going into the details and about mona's condotion also ]
* * * * * *
His voice ...calling of her name "Priya " Priya tum theek toh hai na " Priya
His whimpering murmurs made her cry even more ..she gave up all her strgeth to reach him ..
She is panting ..she saw his love of life sitting on bench near the lake beside an oak tree ..
His one hand is supporting his chest ,His eyes are blazing with pain from the injury ...
She stood beside him
"Ram " with tear ful eyes .
Ram looked at her "Unknowingly a smile crept on his lips "
He signald her to sit beside him ...Tocuhing her cheek affectionately [but it was not touched by ful length ]
"Priya ..Tum theek toh hai na ? kuch chot lag gayi kya ? touching her
shoulders and arms with concern !!![it was all floading away in the air]
Im ..Im ok Ram /...Our aap ..app theek hai ??
Ha priya mai theek hu ??
Why you came here and how you came here ...
A promice to keep "Ram "
I promiced on our marrige day i wont leave you until my death ...
I know you have so many doubts in your mind why i left you 5 years ago ...
i left you 5 years of our great life just for your well being Ram
..When i came to know my mistake i dont want to waste one sec Ram ..
I just came here flying to meet you ...
Will you forgive me and come back to us ...
He nodded in affirmative ,He dont want to be apart from their lives ,He
has had enough .Now he cant live without his two angels ..
She about to embrace him in her delicate arms ...
* * * * *
Doctors & nurses running here and there around the bed ...
The doctor said
1 ...2 ... 3
clear ...clear ...
He inhibited the shock ...
* * * * *
He nodded in affirmative ,He dont want to be apart from their lives ,He
has had enough .Now he cant live without his two angels ..
She about to embrace him in her delicate arms ...
But why something nudging him to embrace her in his arms ...
He jerked & jumped from the bench ...She petrified hastily backed of her hands those are going to be hug him ...
A jet like flow of blood expelled from his chest ..It flashes on her
face ..Her face coloured with his blood ..she rooted to the spot seeing
the vulnerable condition of her love of life ,
She astounded and yelled for help ..She is almost choking with tears
...When she about to take him in her arms to release his pain from
him..but all she grasp is none ..Her hand uninvitebly flowed from his
flesh ..What's happening ...
No ..No this can't be true ...She again wants to touch him ..
* * * * * *
clear ...clear ...
He inhibited the shock ...
The body gasped and flat back ...
2nd shock ...
clear ...
He inhibited another shock ...
* * * * * *
When she about to take him in her arms to release his pain from him..but
all she grasp is none ..Her hand uninvitebly flowed from his flesh
..What's happening ...
No ..No this can't be true ...She again wants to touch him ..
Ram spoke out You can't touch me Priya ..
Why ???? she almost burst out her lungs
He jerks again rolled down fallen in the lake ...Gasping for breath ...
she tried to reach him but the flow of water not allowing to let her in ...
Ram...Plzzz come back to me Ram ..I love you ..
Why can't i touch you ...
Ram gasping.spoke out ..Priya we are hanging our souls to be taken up by
god ..we were not in state of humans anymore ...He is drowning ...
She gulped a lump back in her throat ..That means what ?? why ...
She reaclled the moment when doctor said he is no more ...
""""Priya : Stared at the doctor skeptically ,Did she heard correct
FB
"Her Ram is no more "
What the hell he is talking ,How come my man leaves me alone and go off ..
No this can't be true ,Her eyelashes paused dancing on her eyes ,Her
every muscle tensed up to stand her properly .Each and every cell in her
body screwd up to listen those words from doctor ...
Priya ...Priya ..Mrs. Kapoor ...Every one yelled to compose her ..But she veins of the ground ...
Krishu ji : what happen Priya ..Priya utho ..utho beta
Doctor : cheked her ...Mam she is in a state of shock ...we need an immediate treatment for her ...
Krishu ji : what are you talking about ??
Doctor : Yes mam , before she is slipping into coma we need her to be hospitalized ...""""
Priya jerked off when some water splashes on her ...She looked at
drowning Ram ,Helplessly she is crying and yelling out from help ..
Ram remeber wherever you are i love you ,,I loved you ,i will love only you Ram ..Plz come back for me ...
She dont know what to do or what not to do ,she dont know what phace
she is going thrw ..Is Ram telling truth than how come she come to this
mid forest ..
The high pitch cry of Peehu ..Regained RamPriya sences back to their present ...
Ram is in midle of the lake ..Priya is on the edge of the lake ..Both are looking at each other ...
Priya folded her hands gazed at sky "Plz plz plz save My Ram .dont let my child without father ,plz i beg you "
Ram folded his hands looked up at sky " prayed to god "plz save My Priya ,dont let my peehu with out mother ,plzz"..
He drowned completely under the water .Priya can see the water bubbles
on the lake ..she hussled here and there she yelled at god ..why you did
this to me ..why ?? she has no hopes ..Praying to god just plz let him
be alive ...PLz plz plz
* * * * *
2nd shock ...
clear ...
He inhibited another shock on his body ...
His chest heaves up ..The ECG graph moved dips & curves ...Everyone has a sigh of relief of seeing the changes ...
Doctor : To Krishu ji ..Mam your son out of danger ...We cannot give
gaurantee for your daughter in law ,she has to come back for her
traumatized state , i can tell about her prognosis after 24 hours ...
Krishu ji : shattered hearing the news ...
Ram gained his consious ..First word him from was where was Priya ??
Krishuji turned Peehu to him ,Pehu "Papa aap theek hai na ??
Ha beta mai theek hu .aapka mummy kaha hai ??
She went to temple to pray for you papa...
Somewhere Ram has not satisfied what his lil princess answer ???He signald krishu ji to leave ?
Peehu... he hold her tiny palms in his large ones,Kissing them ..
Peehu jhoot mat bolna ,bolo aapka mamma kaha hai ??
She needs us right now ,Peehu do you hear me ,I will bring mamma back ..
Plz tell me where she is [he very well know they are hiding something
about priya after enact meeting her with in the blue lines of forest ,he
knows that she is in some trouble]
Peehu cried bitterly this time...
Mamma ...
Baby bolo na mamma kaha hai ??
Mamma she sobs hardly ..She is the next room lying lifelessly with all the tubes attached her ..
Papa ..Im calling you and mamma from the morning onwards but both of you not answering me ...
Will you take to mamma's room as nobody is allowing me to go there ...
Mamma was not responding papa ,plz papa kuch kariya na papa ..plzzz..
He feared to the core what might have happen to priya ...
He hold the iron railing called out for the doctor ...
Doctor rushed in ..
Ram said to him ..Plz doctor i want to meet my wife ,Plz i wont stress
out myself ,or my wife's plz give me permission ,she needs us at this
critical point plzzz.
Doctor agreed with him [After all he is the Ram kapoor]
Ram and peehu leads to Priya's room ...
Peehu held one of her arm which was inserted by an iv cannula ,she hold
it in her firm grip sat beside the chair ,laid on her beside slowly
,calling mamma plz wake up ...
Ram strecher was another side ..he clasped her hand in his ..leaned on her ears ..
Priya ...
Priya listen to me ...
I know you can hear me ..After all you only loved me ...he chukled a bit ...
* * * * *
His chukle ringing on her ears ..she pierced to open her eyes to look at him
Water splashing on her cheek ..She opened her eyes fully ..Only to assume Ram was here with her ...
* * * * *
Ram caressing her cheeks "Honey i love you " See peehu is worried for you ,We need you here ,Plz come back ..
I know where you are ...
* * * * *
Priya eyes visualizing a cloudy view of the water ,those are teaming up with her own tears ...She can feel her Ram here ...
Honey i love you " Mai nahi ji saktha tumahari bigair "Constantly ringing in her ears ...She closed her eyes tightly ..
She only prayed god "That Ram should be fit and healthy "
* * * * *
Krishuji:Doc any progress in our Priya ..
Doc;Soo far not any ,But she is being with her family maybe we can expect some ...wait and see
* * * * *
Its almost 4 hours Ram is constantly pouring her love to Priya ..
* * * * *
Priya is rest less ,she is feeling choking sensation ,she is trying to
getup from the ground ...Her eyes desperataly waiting to see only one
person but those were closed against her wish ...Her soul is passing on
the clouds to heaven slowly ..slowly ...
* * * * *
Ram is reluctly let go off her hand from him,He asked the doc plzz some more time ..we need with her in this condition.
While all this yelling ,Peehu got up from her worry sleep instantly she turned to look what's the commotion ...
Suddenly she falls from the chair which where she seated ...Got hurt her kneee ...
The only word came from her mouth is "Mammaaa" ...Her sobs icreased
with the bleeding of the wound and her non stop tugging her mamma with
one hand and uncontrolble pleadings "Mamma" " mamma" aap ne bolo na ,aap
kabhi mera hath nahi chodongi ...
* * * * *
Her soul disturbd listening her Daughters pleading ...Rinsing back to the earth with all her motherly love...
* * * * *
The doctor is trying to clean the wound but Peehu is not letting him to do Nor she is not allowing to take her anywhere else ...
She called once again "Mamma" Plzzz dard ho raha hai "Mammaaa" sobs cntinued...
The room is nearly like msiery to the mess ..
Everyone silenced when they heard a loud gasp from Priya ...
All gazed at her ...
Peehu called out "Mamma ""
The doctors did their maximum on the spot ...And Priya opened her eyes slowly to see the love of her life
To her surprise she can see two pumpkins insted of them ...
She cleared her tears and sleepiness to see what was it ,,Ram &Peehu were intently looking at her ...
She smiled a bit thinking the previous pumpkins were non other than her two angels in life ..
The smile continued to His lips than curved in peehu lips tooo,It began
the other smiling ,the smile spreads to the other ...Totally everyone
is happy that both of them got out of danger from the death...
[So readers ,Im extremly sorry if you dissapoint with the story i move forward,I know so many confused while story moving on ..
I just wants to tell you that ,We are human beings ,Nobody knows what
was the condition when they are nearly to the death ,Like assuming in
Ram&Priya's characetr in this OS,
Some people who were in coma or in uncosious state for hours or so
,Their soul can travel to many places which they were trying to find the
path or some other which their wishes granted to be true ,when they
gain consious most of the persons wont remember what the have gone
through ,But some of the persons remember quite well it happend in many
cases ,When Anu gave this task i was reading one of that article so
immediately i thought why wont i pen down the OS on this subject ,so it
came like this ,Hope you undrstand how i wrote ..
If who doesn't understand the brief one here it is ..
"When Priya heard Ram's death news ,she was traumatized went in shock
,She dont know that has hapend she thought she was running to search for
Ram ,when she found the forest she thought once what happend but her
thoughts overlap by Ram's concern ..
so she meet him over there ..There the souls which are going to pass to
heaven or hell ,will hangout there up to their death ...There she met
him ,That's why she cant touch him or hug him ,Finaly she lost the
battle and her soul is going to heaven but hearing her daughter's plead
GOD sent her back to earth "
So this is my story ,I know many dont like this concept so i want to
give you short an happy life to them ..Here goes ..and mostly welcome
all your commnets and criticism]
Three months passed ...
Bpth were happy in each others company ...Peehu is enough hell to create mess in the kapoor mansion ..
Both Ram & Peehu always pulls her leg and she will be on her tippy
toes up to they left for their respective school & office ...
What so ever also RAYA hadn't developed any physical intimacy ..Both are
eagerly waiting to the other propose ..still it was the same like their
initial marige days ...
ONe fine day peehu going to school ...She walked few steps ,she ran back to Priya ..
Mamma ek kiss do na ...
Priya kneels down her level "Kissed her cheeks very affectionately "Waved her a bye ..
Who usaully mimics Peehu's actions daily .Ram also kneels down asked her
Priya ek kiss do na ...
She was amused at the site of her husband cute face ...
He bits his lower lip realized what he asked for ,abut to get up when
her slender delicate palms cupped his face ,Her soft rosy lips touched
his cheek fervently..
He paused a min ,her rosy lips turned to other side ,he felt her tremble ness while passing his lips ...
He grabbed her lips in his , He tasted them after 5 long years ,It
tasted tenderly sweet ,sugary he is unable to leave her lips ..That kiss
turned to passionate yet so soft ,He nibbled his lowerlip ...His hands
caressing her back moving up and down the levels...
Both are broken a part by Peehu's loud voice ..
Papaaa ..It's getting late ..come sooon ..
They are panting out of the hell ..Nobody knows what happend just now
..Her cheeks flushed to the reminder of their kiss .She wiped the
lipstick mark from his lips walked briskly from the spot ..
He gazed at her retreating back . shook his head in disbelief ,he will
so lost in this beauty ...He smiled ,ran his own finger on lips
,feeling her lips softness.
He got up to drop her Rockstar in school..
Days passed ...One day Peehu stayed in their Nanu's house ...
Ram came back from the work ,When he wants to encircle Priya in his arms ,He heard she is yelling at Peehu ..
He walked towards her ,she was talking in the phone ..
"Peehu ,Listen how can i sleep baby ,if you are not there ..
Only today mamma plz...Aap papa ke sath so jao ...
Peehu mera bachha ...
Mamma plzz Kush hai our nutz bua hai ,we are going movie than skating
than than ha resturent ..Plz mamma ..she asked very cutely
Reluctently Priya agreed and she kept the phone only to dashing Ram
...He slid his arms on her waist asked her what's happening ..
She told that Peehhu wants stay there tonight ...
She gave him towel asked him to take the shower .She will arrange dinner for both of them ..
When he is out ,No sight of Priya ..He called her out but no responce from her ...
Hmm where this madam gone at this add hour ..The banging sound of the windows made him smirk ...Ye barishh bhi na ...
He went to close the windows ..
And a beautiful site invited him.Igniting desires from the core of him ,There his love of life playing in the rain
and her white saree skinned to her body ,She is streching her hands catching the rain drops splashing on her face ..
The cool breezed sending down the chills in her ,But she doesn't care she is enjoying this after so long time..
Now Peehu is not there and Ram will be out after some time ..So she is enjoying the rain to fully ..
Somewhere she can hear the music ,She twirled herself her pallu touched
his face ...She lost herself and drenching in the shower of Rain..
He closed her ...She turned one more time
As she turned her surprised face to him, their lips a few inches apart,
he lifted his one hand to her face while the other rested firmly on the
small of her back to brush away an irate strand of hair from her lips..
she parted them he sealed his lips with hers. Her knees weaken and Ram
circled his other hand tightly around her hip to stop her fall. Their
lips met with their soulmates ...
Who made the first move nobody know..He lifted her wet body in his
strong arms ,Laid down on their king size bed it is waiting for their
reunite from so long time..The matress invited them fully in ,She turned
her side shyly ,Felt the matress sinking beside her ...
His arms running over her abdomen to turn her his side ..She refused
...His lips attacked on her bare skin of the neck ,He sucked it leaving a
lovebite he continued furthur ...Cupid turn over ,the barriers were off
from them ,Each turning into hot blames the 5 years longing ness is
quivering them both to reach the maximum..
He squeezed her mounds ,tasted it along through...Priya you are awesome asusaul "he breathed in her
She hugged him tightly ,Her inner layers filling with his hot desire ,Her moaning doubled "Plz Dont torture me" She sighed
He slid in to her filling all her inner layers ,Welcoming the old
partner .she hugged him tightly ..Tears ran down thrw her cheeks ,He
kissed away the tears ...
Both drifted off to a sugary sleep solacing eachother arms... The starts shyd away clouded them with the dark ...
Snoozy morning ...Peehu knocked the door ...
Ram plz open the door na...He hugged her more tightly ..
She too hugged him back ...Both realized their nude status ,slowly the night flashes back on their minds ..
Both clutched the quilt cover them up [like they did after 12th march]
Priya :closed her eyes with love and blush ...
Ram: dazed ...
The knock reminded their duty ... She dragged the quilt over her ran to the washroom ..
Both avoided eachother maximum ,some unknow akwardness tranpired between them.
The akwardness increased when Peehu is around them...Both duffers dont know what has hapend and how to react that ..
After 45 days ,When he returned from the office ..
Priya is arguing with Krishuji about something ...
He enquired her whats was that about ...
Krishuji told "ha you are uninvited guest .."
But who is that Ram asked puzzled way ...
Priya hid behind krishuji her cheeks are flushing almost turning to red colour ..
Krishuji turned priya to him ...left from there with a smile ..
Kya priya ?? what happen ? scraching his temple...
Oh Ram ..wO .I ..Mean...
Kya priyaa ? he nudged her to tell something ??
Off she sighed and told him ..Kya Ram aap bhi na ??
Im ..Im pregnant ...He hold her near to his chest ..
What ?/ Really ..I cant believe it ... Means when we didnt i mean ..
Its 6 weeks Ram ,After our that night ...
Both reminded quiet ,they knows god has given a special gift ,Only one
night they have been together still he has send the gift to them ..
They both enjoyed the second parent hood ,He fulfilled each of her
craving ,and enjoyed being talking with his baby early in the morning
,late in the night , his baby kickings ,her cravings ..everything he
mehsoosd ...She delivered a baby boy ...4 of them clicked a pic together
...
Perfect family no 1 ..He streched his arm to her ...
Promice ..
she confused ...closing her arm into him ...
To be together always ...
With moisten eyes ...
Sure "Promice" They hugged eachother including peehu and the new baby boy...
A promice to keep [dont know why i kept this name .it just came ,plz plz
leave your comments those are energy boosters for me ,Thank you so much
]
sitting on right side of the bed, removing all her jewellery.He propped
himself on left side , "Are you going to sleep here?next to me .."